Tuesday, October 15, 2013

Comments for Tong and Radika

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8 comments:

  1. I think the presentation went well. You explained the info and video well, as well as answering the questions to the best of your ability. I did like how you incorporated the video to support your generalization about him. I think you two could've made more slides about the main points; other than that, everything was fine.

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  2. I liked the presentation about Eminem a lot. i felt like you could have had more information about how he grew up and the challenges and obstacles he had to overcome. I think you could have provided alot of examples of some of the things or challenges he had. and also more pictures

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  3. They portrayed him really well. I think the struggle that he went through growing up and how he tied that into his music was very clear. I think the examples were on why he is the way he is was shown clearly when you talked about his mother and his wife. I do think there could have been more picture on the slides, and maybe talk about some of his other songs more specifically.

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  4. Overall I thought the presentation was good. You provided good information that allowed me to be more informed about Eminem. Also, I thought that the video helped bring everything together.

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  5. I liked this presentation. I like how you incorporated both his bad side and good side in the presentation. You had good detailed info about all the good things he did, but I think you could have went more in depth about the negative influence he had, other than that, it was really good.

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  6. Radika had good info and did as good as she could do presenting with her accent and admire her charisma. Tong helped out Radika alot and both did a great job presenting and creating their power point.

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  7. the repetitive profanity and other obscene languages through his songs, does give me an excuse to dislike him in some sort. but overall the representation was very good.

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  8. I think you guys portrayed Eminem really well, you showed his bad side as well as his good side. Both of you guys did a great job in my opinion.

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